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I love this story
Please continue this journey! I love reading it!!
I have enjoyed your story so far
I am glad to see that you are fleshing out the personalities of the men in Nika's life. Without this, they remain coldhearted monsters. IMHO, the only way they can be redeemed and forgiven would be for Nika to be released and allowed to return home, only to decide that she really wants to remain at the compound. But then that would be a romance and not a nonconsentual story. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take the plot. Keep up the good work.
EXCELLENT
i agree it is good that you are giving some character to the three men in her life, uptil no they have been a tad flat. Now we are beginning to see they do care for her in their own way.
An excellent story long may it continue.
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