All Comments on 'Lilly's Game'

Loved the voyeur aspect and the tenderness and secrecy. Beautifully controlled and handled. Lovely writing and a most enjoyable read. Thank you!

My, oh my, oh my! Reading this story today gave me the same kind of can't-stand-up-in-public reaction that I had when I heard you read it aloud at the Adult Story Hour. Tasty, tasty. This ranks as one of your very best. :rose:

An excellent quip of playful intimacy. I love the added touch of him watching but never joining in or reacting. Fantastic job!

I enjoyed reading this story, it is a fantastic tale. Please continue writing more chapters to this story. More please.

This was kind of unrealistic. Not the best I've read :/

Lilly has an unusual game...I like it

this is the best story ive ever read please write more chapters