Not very interesting, not erotic. You need to continue with the characters maybe, se where their coupling goes. Do they get freakie? Do they get other people involved? It's a SHORT STORY.
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Not very interesting, not erotic. You need to continue with the characters maybe, se where their coupling goes. Do they get freakie? Do they get other people involved?
It's a SHORT STORY.
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