All Comments on 'Real Friend, Real Love Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great story but......

No complaints about the story, but you should fix the homonyms(words that sound alike but have different meanings). Examples-to & too, waist & waste. Or you could write in Russian, which has no homonyms.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
I'm sorry that all of these bad things have happened to you!

I felt so bad that I had to write. Hang in there; life will balance out after a while. Sara sounds like she is really selfish. She's only there for you at times, not sharing her thoughts and feelings like she should if she loves you. You deserve better than that! Keep looking; you'll find the right woman when the time is right.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
crying

With you. For you. F! Just crying.,

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Wow. You think things are finally going your way with Sara, and then she does this? I think that I would just give up on her. She really doesn't have your best interests at heart. Honesty isn't her strongest suit, either. I am glad that those assholes who hurt you went to prison, and they should stay there for quite awhile, too.

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