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and another one bites the dust
looks like Phil is gonna bite it too =( ah well, was hoping he was going to figure out whatever "it" is and survive somehow.
So it begins...
And so the story really begins. I can just tell the next chapter will open up a whole new world of the story and mysteries behind the lore!
GIVE US IT!!!!
I hope they..turn him into an incubus... That'd be sexy as fuck. ^_^
Great stuff, I really enjoyed this, I hate to be so linear; but cheers for the wikid sex scene!! Hot stuff. But I know you would rather be commented upon the writing, so I'll just slip in, that it's really the quality of the writing that makes any scene described exciting, or in this case, sexy as hell!
Perfect all the way.
Ps..I'll sue you for making us wait so long next time, you've been warned!!!
Arri.
Save Our Fledgling!
I've enjoyed the storyline for Summoning since you initially created it. Your latest chapters have set an excellent pace and teased with possibilities, especially for the fledgling wizard. I, as always, remain hopeful that our wizard (who has come very far from his humble beginnings) somehow manages to survive. After all, we have invested quite a bit into his 'adventures'-- but that is my humble and fervent hope/opinion.
Your latest chapter (113) seems to signal the end, but i hope not. Perhaps this is the moment where the pieces come together for little fledgling.
LET PHIL LIVE
I want the boy to survive...hell he deserves a happy ending....after all...I figure the teacher who got him and his friend in trouble in the first place should finally bite the dust
Can't wait for the next chapter!
I'm always awaiting the next installment of this serie with great impatience, and this one did not disappoint!
As usual your style is flawless, original, and sensual.
Unlike the other posters, I wouldn't mind having our fledling losing his soul to one of the succubus. After all, the girls worked so hard that they deserve their meal :P
excellent as always..
...and very much enjoyed. I'm not sure whether I want him to die or not.. hmm.
It can't end like this!
If he does die then Verde needs to at least keep her promise to be the one who finishes him, not Honey. But really, there are too many unanswered questions that you've hinted at for him to simply die. What are these odd powers he has used, why did Verde take such an interest in him, what did the one with the name I can't pronounce see when his mind shattered and he was left holding one important memory? etc.
DONT LET HIM DIE RAWR
Oh, my fucking holy fuckity fuck.fuck.fuck. noooess
dont let phil die lol, he deserves a happy ending with verde or something like that. anyway i hope you update faster because the waiting is killing me.
PHIL IS SO WINZ
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
It can not end here, this must be the beginning of his transformation. He needs to change and take revenge turning the tables on those sexy daemons. Give him wings and an insatiable lust for sex to over power the succubus and make them his. This story seriously needs to be a movie. OMG! Its the best writing here on Literotica. 100's for all the storys. Just what ever you do "DON'T END THE STORY HERE IT NEEDS MORE"!!! If possable get a few drawings in there and make the story come more to life if that is possable. Unbelieveable writing! Just .... don't .... stop.
To Be Concluded! Noooooooo~
I knew this time would come, and it seems Phil is reaching the end of the line. After all of the over-the-top sex in this chapter, I am wondering how you will top it with the finale. To the finale!
Still fine abd intrigeous
I've read this stories from the time when there were only 7 of them. And I enjoy them till now!
But to rip the story in two parts is really bad thing! ;-D
PS: Don't worry so much. I thought he'll die in 2nd and then in 6th part. X-|
But he didn't. ]8-)
Anyway, this is really fine long story.
Phil must be the luckiest boy on the planet
Do not listen to the first few "old" farts remarks, and please do not END this story. I think the reason for your stories to be soooo popular, because we all envy "poor" Phil, and of course, your writing stile is sooooo flawles, that it is a pure pleasure to read it. Phil is like Hary Poter-always on the verge of death, but not really. LET HIM LIVE...I thank you from all of us
Dmitry USA
another Great Chapter
This is yeat another great chapter. I seem to be with the rest and would hope that Phil survives some how. However as in all stories they do end at one point and even if this is the end for phil I cant see how he goes.
Genius
K so i kinda just went on a reading fest and read all of the chapters up to date in a night and i gotta say i love this. Its like reading an actual book, however i dont think phil should die :( haha i want to see him and verdne together :(
he's a goner
Having read your other works as well (great stuff!) I can say with some certainty that phil is probably doomed. The characters in your other pieces never have cheery ends; but that's part of the charm. ;)
I would like to see Phil able to return to the human world, perhaps crippled in some way from being nearly killed so many times, but I realize that's not likely to happen. I mean, he *IS* in the grips of five very powerful succubi and is more or less dead as it is.
At this point, it's nearly a foregone conclusion.. the only thing left to determine is HOW he goes... right?
Verde & Rosa spin-off!
This is an amazing series you've written...very erotic, great flashes of humor and characters with so much depth, especially Verdé and Rosa. I think they would make for a great "spin-off" so to speak...would love to read their adventures with all kinds of different men - young, old, various professions and locations. Oh, yeah, would love to read some stories of some of the "intruders" who slip through the "weak point in the dimensional fabric" Verdé mentioned. What great tales you could write regarding their discovery of the castle and their confusion as they wandered around wondering what they had stumbled upon (especially the ones who don't know anything about magic)...until they were caught by one or more of the succubi and devoured. What fun that would be. ;) You've created such wonderful characters in these stories, especially Verdé and Rosa...such humor and eroticism, simply amazing. My mind overflows with possible adventures they could have...unfortunately my writing is much more drab than yours. So, I guess I'll just have to keep checking out your submissions...hoping to see more of Verdé and Rosa in other tales. Hey, one can hope, can't they? lol
Great
Great story, but... LET HIM LIVE!!!
awesome
Great reading so far; can't wait for the conclusion. I'll concur with the rest and say it would be nice for Phil to survive, but it's your story to tell.
One of the best stories here
I adore this series. What really sets it apart from the rest is the well-developed story arc and the fact that you have a genuine gift for writing.
The characters of Verdé and Rosa are fantastic, too. I concur with the above poster in that I would love to see a "spin-off" starring the two.
You are a great writer, keep going!
Thanks
Thanks for putting out such good writing its better then a bunch of the crap i have been seeing latly please finish this off. I would like to see Phil live but thats your call happy with what you done. You write nice Succubus stories even though i like vampires as well i would be intrested to see if you do a vampire succubus story some time. but Thanks for the good work
Nurse Honey == Genuine Terror!
Nurse Honey has got to be one of the greatest vixens of all time in the world of erotic horror. Sexy, and yet... genuinely terrifying! With horror fiction, the truly scary parts are always the lingering thoughts... Great job.
wow
delicious
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