All Comments on 'Persephome's Humiliation Ch. 01'

by prometheusfire

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 15 years ago
Too easy on her

First of all, she should have been naked all day. The butt plug should have been so big that it would made it impossible for her to sit on her ass, plus the horse tail sticking out from her ass cheeks would cause a lot of pressure on her gut. Collar and leash her to your desk and make sure she keeps your cock well sucked. Have her stand beside you while you fist fuck her pussy and play with her cervix. Explain to her that she is a hand warmer for you, using her pussy to keep your hand warm.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
doesn't fit in the category at all

This story is definitely not non-consent. It would be better suited to another category. I did not enjoy what could have been a remarkable retelling of the tale of Persephone. Have you even read the myth this was based on? If so, I couldn't tell from your numerous inaccuracies. As a whole, I found the story disappointing.

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