Step-Sister

Dribble

Same old dribble... stopped reading after first paragraph.

Is there ANYONE who believes this 8"x3" bullshit.

Get a life...

Pure waste of time...what dribble!

great story!

Can't wait for the continuation! Don't listen to the haters!
It was really hot and very sexy! Keep writing!

Unrelated Siblings

Every opportunity existed in this story for you to make a Mommy out of your step-sister. You totally fucked it up, therefore a fucked up rating.

good for a quickie

True, it is sophomoric fantasy but I have had similar experiences, albeit with more realistic individuals, so for the basics of a nice hot quick fuck-n-suck--and licking, which included a rusty trombone, not seen in many m/f stories--I will agree not to listen to the haters man. This was a genuine good story and I truly hope you keep 'em comin'

Not bad, overall.

I was a bit put-off by your misuse of the present tense throughout you story. However, I thought it was a pretty good tale overall.

Perfect match

What a great pair who know how to give and take . Is this the end or the beginning ?

Sick of "average" 8x3" cocks!

If only I could be like these guys and have a 8"or 10"long & 3" or 5"around dick then I wouldn't have a girlfriend but I could fuck my 40DDD or 42EEE breasted sisters and mom and aunts and cousins until I couldn't walk!!!

Hey, "Dribble," the word is "drivel," you idiot.

"Dribble" is what you do when you read about oversized cocks. "Drivel" means to talk stupidly; e.g., your comment.

Take it from a woman

Take it from a woman with a size 44ddd, i have esperienced an 8x3 cock, and one bigger, they exsist and are wonderful.

If only I had such a nice stepsister

I wanted to give this a higher rating even though 100% is a little too high, but I liked the story and 75% is too low. I tend to overlook the grammatical errors and just enjoy the stories. It amuses me to hear the gripes from the little wankers with small dicks who complain about the 8x3" etc. I, myself, was always embarrassingly smaller in high school but now my dick is 8 in. in length. I know that the average is 6 in and 8 in is unusual but it is not all that uncommon and certainly not impossible. And, let us not forget these stories are fantasies so why take out your frustrations on the author who did a pretty good job of writing it? Can you do better? As a writer myself I am sensitive to such criticisms and stopped writing for two years because of similar criticisms. I think the author should be commended for writing an overall pretty good story. I liked it. Flames don't help improve things, constructive criticism does. Oh, and by the way, I left out my username to avoid flaming myself.

Awesome

Hope you write another part!

wtf

what the fuck is he an idiot no one in their right mind buys a house then leaves it to an exgirl friend what a waste of money anyone with half a brain sells the house leaving the ex out in the street this guy needs to have his brain examined

to house comment

about the house comment,
its just to set up the story, these story's are usually 100% fake but written so that our fucked up minds can get off.

Dumbass

p.s. think b4 you write next time while your dreaming about sucking on your mama 's titie

to ass below

if a site has a fantasy area then all other areas have to be realistic and believable. so get your dick out of your boyfriends ass and give some honest comments ON THE STORY it is the only way these idiot writers will ever improve. the house comment was totally right it ruins the story because no one is that stupid and if they are they would still be with the slut girl friend.

DBRS

Hated it

Retarded story

Good but need some work, still 5 star

Good but need some work, still 5 star