Yeah, this is pretty shitty. The guy in the story is terrible in bed, which is just bad for a sex story. All he does is penetrate. I mean, that is just awful writing: He penetrated her, it hurt, abrupt ending. You need to flesh these stories out. This has to have been written by a guy who is shitty in bed and has zero imagination outaide of his own limited capabilities. Get real.
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You can't write effectively
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Yeah, this is pretty shitty. The guy in the story is terrible in bed, which is just bad for a sex story. All he does is penetrate. I mean, that is just awful writing: He penetrated her, it hurt, abrupt ending. You need to flesh these stories out. This has to have been written by a guy who is shitty in bed and has zero imagination outaide of his own limited capabilities. Get real.
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