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Matters of the heart

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by Anonymous

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by normal jean05/06/09

vivid

such a clear vision you paint. I loved this; felt drawn into him and pulled towards each new verse.

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by greenmountaineer05/07/09

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You have a fluency in your submissions that I admire, particularly when you can extend it as long as you do here with such clarity.

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