...but too much work on the macho stuff and not enough on the detail... put enough hot detail in and even acting like a dick will go over well...
Machismo. More sorry for the girl your protagonist married. She's stuck with his egotism longer.
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...but too much work on the macho stuff and not enough on the detail... put enough hot detail in and even acting like a dick will go over well...
Meh
Machismo. More sorry for the girl your protagonist married. She's stuck with his egotism longer.
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