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Mei Lin

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/16/05

ok stroy, but the unrealism makes it weak

i mean you cannot just throw your wife out and leave her with nothing. it takes lawyers and court even if she is a cheater. and since the hero also did, his chance of winning is low - he would be expected to lose house to her, and alimony.

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by srgeek07/21/09

Interesting story, but...

Interesting story, but it desperately needs a few dozen reality checks along the way.

Surprisingly, the spelling, word use, sentence structure, and punctuation is is better than a lot of others I've read here.

-- srgeek -

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by oahuphoto12/02/09

Wrong name!

Sorry, but Mei Lin is a Chinese name - definitely NOT Japanese.

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