Watched

Excelent!

Great first story, well written and very erotic! I Look forward to more of your naughty tales in the future.

delicious

Wonderfully erotic... I can't wait for another instalment. Do the characters dare repeat their naughty escapade? Do they take things further? Does she experiment with her newfound exhibitionism in other situations? Does his wife discover their guily pleasure? such potential...

Very well written

This was very well-written and not too long. Seductive and sexy and delicious. Great job!

PRETTY GOOD

I would like to see where this is going. Are they going to get more naughty? What next,she lets him lick her out? That would be cool,but build it up slowley.

Better than

pretty good...perfect!

I Love To Watch

I just love to watch a woman bring herself off. Very well written story that creates a very hot and realistic scene. I would love to be John! I have only witnessed this first hand twice and it was a incredible turn on. I wish I could convince her to perform again!

Very, very well done. I have been trying to encourage my wife to give me this kind of show, it hasn't happened - yet. I will share this with her and tell her how hard it made me! Fingers crossed for luck!