All Comments on 'The Lesson'

by Beautifullittlebaby

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moonstormermoonstormeralmost 15 years ago
a bit quick

i think the concept of your story is good, and you have some very hot elements. it just seems to happen very quickly, without any buildup - i would love to read more when you took your time a bit more and drew out the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
fast..

slow down & build up the suspence..

hornychick617hornychick617over 12 years ago
Made me cum

As much as i'm not that into anal, this story turned me on very much and i had a big orgasm and was very wet after. Keep writing these stories. You are great at it.

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