All Comments on 'Then He Left.'

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Yuri5Yuri5about 12 years ago

It's good at the start but the ending you have and the title "then he left" makes it feel inconclusive, because the words are too dramatic since the woman doesn't care and the man hasn't stopped caring. It's not like he said "if I leave through this door now, it'll be the last you'll ever see me", and it's not like she started thinking "wait... I'm just confused but I think I may love you, don't go". I hope you can see why I think it's too dramatic a title.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
This is not a romance!

It is really an anti-romance!

CrazyDaveTrucker60CrazyDaveTrucker609 months ago

Wow that just fell off a cliff. No real answer just a host of questions. Needs a follow up, if for no other reason than to clear things up. Did he commit suicide, just leave, was it his house? Did she have a change of heart? Or just a heartless bitch? Maybe in his depression he found someone perfect for him, he was able to recover from her, and move on. Maybe the guy she thinks is so great dumps her, that's karma, and she misses him. This story could go a dozen different ways. It felt like an appetizer, but no entree.

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