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Jeremy's Journey Ch. 01

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by Anonymous05/19/09

Pretty Good

Pretty well written with no obvious errors. The theme is fairly common, but well done for a first effort. Hope you continue it.

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by Anonymous05/20/09

well written

well written... good start but dont leave it here.. do continue....

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by Anonymous05/25/09

Great Story

This was a great story with a great ending, "Mom!?!?!?!"
I hope that's a 20 year old daughter who's about to introduce her mother to girl on girl love, with Jeremy's assistance and participation. I hope each of her children is a daughter. This would be a terrific story even if written by a pro. Keep this story going.

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by Anonymous09/30/09

Part 2?

An excellent story! Is there a Part 2? Or is that all you had?

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