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Well written story about a couple with nothing to loose. Almost all the couples I have met that are into swinging or dating were in the same boat, nothing to loose. Don't think you would try any of this with a great marriage.
Good Story
I enjoyed it very much. I look forward to reading your other stories. Thanks for sharing.
You've done it again.
Another great story..
Nice, Very Nice
Oh how I was frustrated with the start but once I got into it...well...it was nice, very nice.
I like the solid characters and very believible situation.
Another "keeper".
Jerry
good
Real relief. I was really afraid all four would die in a multiple car collision or something. This is not especially erotic, but is a great story of starting over or ''Making Love out of Nothing at All''. You should do more of this type of story. You know, this story could use a little more. Discussion and tears. Resolution to make a new start. Finding a way to begin and plan a path to take. Light at the end of the tunnel. Great sex, even explore Susan's and Bill's lifestyle to see if thats in their future for playtime. An Epilogue to catch us readers up (years later,of course) to how it all worked out, what their history has been like, do they become good parents and kids to be proud of, and are they anticipating grandchildren. Yes, a little more to give our young couple an opportunity for some good ole' make-up sex and a final wrap-up.
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