It just seemed as if the story was rushed a little. Maybe more descriptive sex and erotic dialogue would make it a great story. Thanks for the post......Rich
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Good story, you have to have Travis and Mom enjoying more adventures with each other and young friends.
But I prefer it when the son cums in the mom (pulling out makes no sense, pre-cum has sperm in it as well and can also get the woman pregnant) - the thrill of a possible pregnancy is a huge turn-on for me.
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It's a good story
It just seemed as if the story was rushed a little. Maybe more descriptive sex and erotic dialogue would make it a great story. Thanks for the post......Rich
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Good story, you have to have Travis and Mom enjoying more adventures with each other and young friends.
Good story, but...
It was a good story, and nicely written.
But I prefer it when the son cums in the mom (pulling out makes no sense, pre-cum has sperm in it as well and can also get the woman pregnant) - the thrill of a possible pregnancy is a huge turn-on for me.
Still, good story overall.
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