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Mr. Handyman Ch. 02

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by dtimber05/20/09

Good . . .

I like that you can write -- character development, pace, plot -- and that you hang sex all around it. Lookin' for more.

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by PennLady05/20/09

Nice

It's fun watching this relationship develop. Looking forward to more.

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by srgeek06/05/09

It looks like this is for a USA audience, but...

It looks like you're writing this is for a USA audience, if you are, you're doing pretty well, but "tucking in" is a United Kingdom expression.

-- srgeek --

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