Desiring Another Man's Wife Ch. 09

This

Is a black mans fantasy of what he'd like to do, so anyone who is dumb enough to think a black is their friend should be warned, they would fuck you over in a new york minuite.

boring

This kind of stories come up again and again. Michael can't be that stupid not to see what's happening here, especially now. He should tell Minique to fuck off and wish his (soon to be ex ?) wife good luck for the rest of her life as the slut she's bound to become for Victor and frieds. The story as such is becoming boring.

Boring, predictable,not erotic,

Only very sick white men and women and black men would want this as a fantasy. This is sickness of the highest order. I am guessign that the writer is either a white female or a white male pretending to be black. Or someoen wantign to be black, sort of the reverse of Mr Jackson.

I had high hopes for this story

but it is turning to a typical cuckolding interracial story. In other words, this story isn't about DESIRING ANOTHER MAN'S WIFE, it is now DESIRING SEEING MY WIFE FUCK A BLACK COCK. I'm so dissapointed.

badd

dude, i have been a constant admirer of your work! But, now I must say that I cant read this shit anymore!!! Sorry but this is pathetic!!

really disappointed

you completly and deliberatly misslead every reader by your title. your just a stupid racist. and your talent to write is completly wasted on you. it's like to throw pearls before swine

A very high percentage of drug users and criminals

A very high percentage of drug users and criminals are indeed black. Sure, there are a handful of notable exceptions but watch the evening news... who do you see? The author when he isn't kidding himself about his place in society.

Zebra Club

Can't wait to see what's going to happen in Zebra Club

SUPER!!!

One of the best stories out there! please keep it up. Love this cuckold scenario!

I thought Obama ....

...wrote into law a proscription against torture.Stop this senseless agony now.Interject one normal/typical moral compunction into the behavior of any of the characters and let this cuckold mobius strip fold into nothingness,from whence it came.How long you wanna have this sad tale in your head anyway?25 points 'cause you can write legibly.Pistolpackinpete

Scary people out tonight.

Slut wife cuckold husband dominant black husband, blackmans slut, blackmans slut wife yes It must be XLEGOVER.

Write for yourself and those who enjoy your work..

I just finished reading chapter 9, in your latest work, desiring another man's wife. I also read the comments from your readers and want to comment on both. So here are a few points...
1. By far, you are probably one of the top three writers on the site and your stories are excellent.
2 your critics are way off base when they criticize your story line. You write to please yourself and don't worry about the critics. You are pursuing a story line and creating something that many enjoy. If the critics don't like your stuff because of the story line, then they have a problem. They can provide constructive criticisms, but complaining about a story line is wrong.
3. Try to write more often. I think your stories are excellent and you develop your characters to a very nice degree. They are as realistic as the short story can allow and realistically fit the scenes you create. I like the way you change the action by having monique, then Michael, then Jen as the narrators of the story. Now we (and more importantly Michael) finally saw Victor exert his control and even Michael was under the spell. I can see Monique controlling him in the near future and Victor controlling them all. Very, very well done. Just keep up the story and please provide the chapters with more frequency.

Outstanding

This is absolutely outstanding. Cannot wait to see the next installments. Think your work is right up there with the very best such as stombringer and suewatcher. Keep up the great work! Remember if you were publishing, it is how many that like the work a lot that matters. Those who are anti seem to be looking in the wrong section of literotica.

Great Stoy

I'm realy enjoying this story and hope it never ends. It's so exciting to read erotica about other white women who also enjoy in sex with black men. I can relate to how much they enjoy it and seems as if I can never get enough of it. Hopefully I will see more chapters to this story..

you had me

this series is so well written, flowing so well, that l had to believe it was true and l was enjoying it immensely. l was so into it that l actually got up at 5am to read where l had left off because l dreamt about it and had a hardon for much of the night. it all changed, pretty much, with the bending over the pool table at the club and the room that few knew about with the speaker. that just went from believable to storytime.
that said, chapters one thru eight were a superlative read, some of the best.

The husban should cut that mother fucken niggers ball off and than the niggers wifes tits off and put ever thing up victors wifes cunt.