All Comments on 'Heartbeat'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
pregnant

A good Start to the story. It would be nice if Jenny got pregnant right away with twins. Then decides that she likes being pregnant. They decide together that Jenny should be a barefoot, naked, baby making machine having a least 20 children.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
pretty nice

nice - but no real emotion and no "story"

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Wow!

I really wish my girlfriend and I had a weekend like this to ourselves! We're young and in love like this couple

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