I enjoyed this story. The author made the fictional characters believable. They weren't perfect models, they were real people each with real flaws. I was drawn in with how the character's reality mixed with her fantasy. I also liked how the character got her wish (with her husband) at the end. It was a delightful look inside the woman's private world. Well done, joperrine. Give us more, please.
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An exceptional first effort
I enjoyed this story. The author made the fictional characters believable. They weren't perfect models, they were real people each with real flaws. I was drawn in with how the character's reality mixed with her fantasy. I also liked how the character got her wish (with her husband) at the end. It was a delightful look inside the woman's private world. Well done, joperrine. Give us more, please.
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