Liar Ch. 03

SUPER!!!!

HOTTTT!!! and a really great chapter, and the fact chapter 4 is in the editing process means a shorter wait!

Good work

Those were the flashbacks, when they were young and stupid. Teenagers ARE cliched. Uncertain, overly emotional, inarticulate. I thought that both protagonists were realistically portrayed. The real romance and the real character development is about to start. Romance and adults is a whole 'nother ball game :) Looking forward to the next chapter.

Hurry please!

Only disappointment was that this chapter was too short!! Please hurry with the next update, can't wait!!

don't listen

To people that can't even spell character correctly...if you enjoy writing and me a reader like many others enjoy it, keep writing for that reason alone it doesn't matter if some people don't understand it...because I know that gabe is a confused probably born womanizer and doesn't know how to react to a relationship and that sloane is a independent woman who is trying to figure out her feelings and where she stands for them. Keep up the good work and I would love to read more soon.

Great!!!

That was very hott and very sexy, but i also think it was too short and i dont really like being left hanging like that but i am sure i will be pleased with the next chapter. the longer we wait the sooner we will forget what we just read so please hurry

love it!

please finish this story!

more please!!!

PLEASE hurry up with the next chapter. Loving the rest but they're too short! Can't wait to see what happens next :)

the wait is killing me!

AHH!!!!! where is chapter 4????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!

amazing story!!!