by Frimbles
im enjoying it greatly, jus hope she doesnt take it overboard or anything by forcing him to do something...unmanly, or try to "fuck him"
Your writing has a really good sence of place to it! Katie is a real jerk but I like how bold she is about it. Interested to see what happens next!
It's a shame you didn't continue with this story! Perhaps it's not too late?