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Yahooo!
Love this chapter and only ask that you do not keep us waiting for the next chapters!
yay!
So glad to see more! Very nice job of keeping all of the plot threads moving. My only problem -- Sean seems to have had a quick turn of heart, given his earlier actions, although I realize his father was controlling him a little. I wouldn't mind seeing some time devoted to Sean to explain him a little more.
Love it!
Ohhh yay! it was so good to see this story! I love it! Please more and soon! Thanks!
Thank U so much
Thank u for adding to this story. still can not wait for them to find that guard.
Thank You
I have been waiting on this chapter anxiously.
Thank you
You have made my day!I have been waiting anxiously for this chapter. My only problem is that it was to short :) I cannot wait to meet Koi :) and what is Sean up to anyway?
Love it!
Thank you so much for updating! I've been checking everynday if yu updated this story. Out of all the Venus series this is my favourite so far. By the way I wanted to ask how old Gabriel is?
=]
great story, you have such imaginative ideas. can't wait to read the next chapter.
Damn
Please continue to write....this was amazing and i can't wait to see more
you are the best
I love the story line, the suspense drives me crazy. checking every day for the new chapters. Keep it up
Love This Story
I love this story. It's full of magic, and love, and evil, and good. I'll wait as long as you need for the next chapter. Thank you for sharing your amazing talent.
gotta finish them up! PLEASE!
great great great story-lines.
can't wait for continuations!!!!
drums impatient fingers on table
Three months and counting...
dont stop
we need more please....
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