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The Awakening of Love Ch. 12

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by Anonymous05/29/09

Love it!

I really love these kinds of stories! There so good and romantic! Cant wait to see wait happens next! Please more and soon! Thanks!!

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by Anonymous09/29/09

finances and breastfeeding

The money side of the story makes no sense. No way, could a tanning salon support a beach front property as well. Where does Jake get the money to buy their own house? Breast-feeding is a fairly god but not perfect method of birth control that they would have been aware of.

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