....and no sex yet! Just a few annoying editing errors: 'heightered his height advantage' for example. But I'm hanging in there for the next chapter!
You know how to keep a reader wanting more. Very erotic undercurrent.
Great...got me hooked.
LOVE IT SO FAR
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Tense, well-written...
....and no sex yet!
Just a few annoying editing errors: 'heightered his height advantage' for example.
But I'm hanging in there for the next chapter!
Wanting more
You know how to keep a reader wanting more.
Very erotic undercurrent.
Great...got me hooked.
SEXY
LOVE IT SO FAR
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to The Briefcase Ch. 01 or
More submissions by MissSenses.