much better than your average run here. nice to see someone who knows the english language and how to use it.
and then what???...don't leave us hanging...
I like your style and exceptional use of language. You have a gift that you should share with us.
I enjoyed your story. Keep up the good work!
And I would add nothing further. Stands on its own.
beginning
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well written, nicely done
much better than your average run here. nice to see someone who knows the english language and how to use it.
Oh my....
and then what???...don't leave us hanging...
Great theme and wonderful language.
I like your style and exceptional use of language. You have a gift that you should share with us.
Nice!
I enjoyed your story. Keep up the good work!
Superb
And I would add nothing further. Stands on its own.
an interesting
beginning
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