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by PennLady05/31/09

Cute

I'm not entirely sure where this is going, but it's cute and I'd like to find out. I'm sure you aimed to keep this short, but a little more background about the characters would have helped flesh it out. Where they're from -- where they are -- how they know each other, etc. But I figure that's for the next chapter. :)

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by Anonymous05/31/09

Lord*!!

I voted you a '5' and rated you a '10' and as I am sitting here - I wonder why I did that*! Ever have your mind go blank and wonder why you did what you just did ? Who where what and when is going on here.? Oh well the next part better be better.* Thanks, I think. LOL JAG/TSO

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