"I made my way back to where my beer was warming in the sunshine." European beer is meant to be drunk at room temperature, not warm -- that's because it has an actual taste.
Meticulously and wonderfully written story. Enjoyed reading it and wished I were the young man enjoying the warmth and tightness of the naked woman s pussy.
What a pleasant story, nice build up with just the right amount of heat to a satisfying sizzling end. very clear, visual imagery. Just the right amount of descriptions. Nice work. I look forward to more
the nameless male in the story didn't stay around. They could have had a wonderful, sex-filled day together. Even so, it was a good story. Good luck in the contest.
English
Pervert!!
"I made my way back to where my beer was warming in the sunshine." European beer is meant to be drunk at room temperature, not warm -- that's because it has an actual taste.
Perfect
What a stunning vignette of a day in teh sun! I loved it, it contained innocence, lust, and erotically charged sensuousness. You must write more!
Very nice, indeed
I wish I had a garden like this one. ;)
Great story
Meticulously and wonderfully written story. Enjoyed reading it and wished I were the young man enjoying the warmth and tightness of the naked woman s pussy.
pleasant read in the sun
What a pleasant story, nice build up with just the right amount of heat to a satisfying sizzling end. very clear, visual imagery. Just the right amount of descriptions. Nice work. I look forward to more
Delightful
Deliciously erotic.
Too bad...
the nameless male in the story didn't stay around. They could have had a wonderful, sex-filled day together. Even so, it was a good story. Good luck in the contest.
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