All Comments on 'Zephyr'

No one has commented on this yet! Holy moly, girl, this is a good one. I sang your praises, probably very embarrassingly, on the review thread of the Poetry Forum, so feel free to come by and take a look at my [slobbering] adoration. I cannot imagine a piece like this is easy to craft, and that is why I have gone fairly into orbit about it. So I thank you very much for sharing, and ask you to please keep on!

If this is how you start your journeying with us here I can't wait to read what else you have waiting to show us. Fabulous more more please

Too many 'a's in the first stanza, trip over metrical feet, but the flow is nice after.

I was not expecting to find anything good tonight. I loved this. It's amazing.

Five.