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Fantasies
My, but you are a randy little slut, aren't you?
It would be very erotic to watch
Five guys having their way with a little horny girl would certainly make her husband's cock hard. I wonder if the real thing was as good as the fantasy? Thanks for the good story........Rich
Stop being jerks
First I want to let you know I enjoyed the story, it was not the best I have ever viewed on this site but it was good for your second submission. Now to all the jerks that have to be so negative, grow some balls and leave your information, Anonymous is a cowardly way to be a jerk and hide. This woman has a fantasy, and like most people who post things on this site are smart enough to know how to be safe and smart and the pros and cons to their actions. It is funny to me that the people who have bad things to say and are the most judgmental are always “Anonymous.” Have fun do what you want every situation can turn out good or bad. The key is trust and communication. It is also important to establish boundaries and key words to let you partner know how you are doing and feeling. Many people have done it and had fun and some have not enjoyed it, you will not know until you try. Have fun and please keep us posted. Capt13
No Rating
This story reads like a cheap porn. Nothing exciting here.
if it is your kink....
The gangbang fantasy is a hot one, if that is your dream. She did a good job creating something that was a sweet gift. There would be some clean up involved, and the loving couple could have a fun time telling each other the best parts. Good job livvy, next time give some examples of the naughty things they all said to one another. Bukake, yum. Add some condoms to make it real.
Good story, needs dialogue!
A good dirty little story here, but it needs dialogue. Don't tells us what they said, let your characters speak for themselves.
Good Story, with great action.
This was a good fantasy story with great action. I'm sure everyone has had this or a similar scenario run through their mind at one time or another. I would have liked more deatils, and dialog though. That being said I did enjoy the story. OK now for the anonymous nit whits who don't understand that this is erotic writing, and not the church lady seminar. The stories here are written to stimulate the sensual mind. NOT to follow the conventional limitations and dogma set down by their narrow minded moralistic edicts. If you don't like group sex stories fine don't read them. If you want to critique the story fine, but if you want to attack the author or the story without justification that's wrong. Grow a back bone. Stop being a jellyfish and a coward. Get a pair of balls (maybe you can borrow your old pair from your wife). Leave your name so we all know who you are and can either ignore you or continue a critical dialog via email ... or not. Either way it seemes to me the attacks are unjust and unwarrented.
Fantasies are Fantasies
I enjoyed reading this fantasy, for your second submission its good. Agree with the dialogue comments, disagree with all the negative. It is just a fantasy.
Okay Livvy!
I would like to give you full marks for a very erotic story. However even knowing this is a fantasy of yours I would like to think you wouldn't Really do something like this? although if you ever did then good luck to you it just isn't my idea of fun or fantasy. I am not putting your fantasy down it's just not my fantasy. But that said as long as you know what your doing and you are both happy with it. Then as I said good luck to you both. As for the story itself? well written and okay dialogue may help but I think we got the idea and it was well written.
I love naughty dirty girls and hotwives
and this was a horny fantasy. Looking at the other comments, there's a lot to agree with. Things that are great in fantasy don't always make a smooth transition to reality. It's a dangerous game. But I think adventurous and sometimes extreme sexual acts CAN be contained in a strong and loving relationship. If it ain't solid and secure it could obviously lead to all sorts of trouble. People like Jaded One have an irrefutable point, and believe marriage is too sacred to risk just for some kicks. I have to respect that as true. But I also think fantasy is healthy and contiguous to that little spark of fun that keeps lovers together, and in some cases fantasy can safely live in reality. Every relationship is as different from another as the desert from the sea. Sometimes we must all just agree to disagree. In peace. Mancelt.
One into five winner takes all
great story my gang fantasy hope there's a follow up part to this very hot erotic story.
Too bad
It's so unfortunate that I can't do this in real life, unless I've asked every single one of them to take a STD test, which seems kinda silly.
Or tell them to wear a condom, but a gangbang with no creampie is boring. xD
I feel the same thing when I think of Peri Gilpin in a gangbang
here is the actress I;m talking about https://www.facebook.com/CSICrimeSceneInvestigatio n/photos/pb.21280704526.-2207520000.1397228466./10 151658757499527/?type=3&theater she sexy,big tits and I can't stop thinking about her getting fucked by tv crims,hunky actors,real crims,everything I wanna see her getting the fucked out of her
B391
A lovely erotic fantasy. Keep writing!
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