All Comments on 'The Girls at the Store Ch. 01'

I wish I had co-workers like that. These girls sound like a lot of fun. Are you guys hiring? Since this is Chapter 1, should I expect another chapter? How soon?

Three young girls. What could be better?

good story but the word daddy was way overused. it almost ruined it.

A great story and I disagree with the comment about overuse of the Daddy word. I don't think it signifies anything incestuous but is just an expression by the girls of affection for an older, stronger, wiser guy who initially filled that paternal gap in their lives then went on to become their lover; the relationship changed, but the name stuck...

Anyway an impressive start to what I hope will develop as a series of chapters showing how things develop between the 4 of them and the individuals concerned work out their dreams, goals and sexuality...

Definitely every man's fantasy and very nicely written. Good job, Daddy.

Just a great story! Im hoping for another chapter, but since I don't see one showing in the side panel my hoped aren't high :( I'll check the folder though!

'Daddy' wasn't over used, the reader just wasn't paying attention to the story!

Mmm, talk about three delicious dishes, whew! I'd eat up that little short, skinny thing :)

Chapter 3 ends with "To be continued...."

But that was 10 years ago.

I do not knowingly start a story that is not finished.

However, in this instance, I'm glad I did. The story is worth it.

The ending is not bad.

It IS abrupt.

And a cliffhanger, that has you wondering what happens next and wishing for more.

Otherwise, a 5 star story all the way.

Paul in Oklahoma