That was short, would of liked a longer piece but it was well written. i noticed that something was missing in this chapter,it didnt keep me glued 2 my screen until i reached the end like ur previous works, or is just this way 4 me? keep writting, u are a brilliant author,ur fan,tani.
Well, it is developing, however a bit more info and fill in of character would have been nice. Looking forward to the next installment, keep up the good work
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That was short, would of liked a longer piece but it was well written. i noticed that something was missing in this chapter,it didnt keep me glued 2 my screen until i reached the end like ur previous works, or is just this way 4 me? keep writting, u are a brilliant author,ur fan,tani.
Okay,
Well, it is developing, however a bit more info and fill in of character would have been nice. Looking forward to the next installment, keep up the good work
Thank You
Thank you for another story. I will be looking for another chapter to this story. I hope it will come soon.
Good
Thank you for writing another chapter of this story. I think it has a lot of potential. I cannot wait to read another chapter soon!
can you say SET UP
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