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byDeLaine©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/17/04

Damn!

Damn!

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by Desamy08/17/04

More!

Very naughty, and very well written. You'll be sure to produce another excellent story now that you're back with us - good luck!
And whoever said Mommies weren't sexy and can't have some fun? ;)

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by Anonymous08/28/04

Some friend

Linda doesn't need enemies, does she?

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by Imagetaker11/08/06

Scorcher Warms Up a Chilly Fall Day

Very nicely done. Perhaps some additional angst about the moral conflict would have heightened the sexual tension. Nevertheless it was a very enjoyable story and I hope there is more in the future.

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by godot12/19/12

Nice!

Well written and very erotic.

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