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- Best Friends Ch. 02
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All Comments on 'Best Friends Ch. 02'
by Serinitee
- 18 Comments
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoGreat story. I love to read more about these two. Great job on the writing the story. =).
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoEnough already with the ********** line break nearly every 3-4 paragraphs.
msjay123almost 15 years agoyou should most def. continue!!!! makes me believe love between bestfriends really can work!!! please continue!!!!!
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoI love Jae and Bryan. They're best friends and no regrets after taking their relationship to the next level. It's nice to have a sweet story. But, like the other reader said, the "***" can be a bit annoying. I still love the story though!
kypsalisalmost 15 years agoI loved the story...very sweet and romantic. I also understood the line break. It was refreshing to get both characters views and the line break made it easier to see the switch. Great stuff! I'd love to read more!
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoMORE, MORE, MORE!!!! Puhhleezzz! It was amazing! Please continue writing on this story!
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoI loved the story, was very well written, and was actually able to see it. I liked the "****" line breaks, as one said, was easier to make sense of what was goin on. Please keep the story going.
Seriniteealmost 15 years agoAuthorThanks for all the positive feedback. Okay the vote is in, I will be submitting another chapter (or two or three). As far as the ***** is concerned, I'm really sorry it was distracting to some - I'll try to minimize it. However, as others may have understood, it's what keeps me organized, and it's the only cue I can give the reader that lets them know that they aren't in the same scene anymore. I'll brainstorm some ways to get the best of both worlds though! :) Serinitee
brownskinnedcutieover 11 years agoThat was cute!! I really don't that ahole that she was dating, he didn't care care anything about her beyond the sexual.
