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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/04/09

How about that....

...she came,she clawed, she bonked her.(My apologies to Cicero)Pistolpackinpete

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by Anonymous06/04/09

Proofreading works - try it

Spell check only works if you read. You "knew" it once at least - the rest of the time it must have been "new" to you. The story line was good, but spelling/grammar ruined it.

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by Anonymous06/04/09

Not My Thing

Doing this after a year, don't have kids for a while, if the best sex you ever had was with other people I don't think much of your chances of making your marriage last. Writing O.K.

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by Anonymous06/04/09

Good Story, But It Needs Very Serious Editing!!!

Keep TRYING!

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