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Iskara Ch. 05

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by Anonymous06/16/09

Too Rushed

The whole scene started out very suddenly, and ended just as suddenly. The story went from torture to sex in just a couple paragraphs. Add some foreplay and dont skip any details of the erotic parts. Still loved it, but it just felt like it was out of the blue.

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by Anonymous09/21/10

great story thank you

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by Anonymous05/30/14

Finish it.

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