All Comments on 'Pre Globe; beyond the city walls'

I really like the poem overall and I think it does well with the trigger. I would only suggest that the lines be kept the same metrical length. I'll pass along a piece of wisdom I received in a comment once. It's usually better for the ending words to have more variety of sound. Your ending words are different, but all end in basically an "rd" sound. Nice poem though. Keep them coming!