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by vrosej1006/04/09

Unbelievably good.

This is such a good poem. I love the imagery. It's kind of desolate. I like a sad vibe.

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by WickedEve06/04/09

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Great poem, great descriptions. I can really see these people: "Posed singly or in groups stiffly as if the camera threatens, smiling warily to oblige “cheese” teeth bared patiently."

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by UnderYourSpell06/05/09

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I have really enjoyed dipping into your 'albums' and devastated they got left out in the rain!

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by Neonurotic04/21/13

I think you found my mom's Album...

Just love "discovering" older poems, glad you have history here on Lit so I can. I agree with miss Evie (I miss her) on how you describe these photos. such rich detail I feel like I'm opening the album. Fantastic.

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by fridayam08/28/13

A La Recherche

du Temps Perdu, and delicately done via that dumpster. I found the last few lines extermely poignant. I did wonder whether you needed S2, as it is the weakest point of a great piece.

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