by tadnam100
I liked the premise of the girl being taught about sex, but the beginning of the story was just so silly, I didn't read the rest of it.
The author places the story in Washington state in a small community in the Rockies. That's what he said. Problem is that no part of the Rocky Mountains are in Washington state. After that the story got worse.
How old are you indeed. This does sound like a school boy fantasy,and one that you would get jailed for! I also do not belive see could have reached 18 and not heard the word sex before. What planet is she living on! Also had she not had a single period between the ages of about 11 and 18! Come on!
Have you ever met a girl who didn't know by 18 that boys and girls have different parts. Dude where did you grow up in a amish villiage or something!!
hi i'm the author i'd like to point something out.
the whole point for you to read this is that its a fantasy
2 types of people read this shit people who get no sex and
people who want something that can't happen. i am the latter and clearly you are the former. as to my geography i live in england and couldn't care less if the rockies were in honolulu.
just try to remember those of you quivering in outrage at my inaccuracies, bathed in the flickering glow of your computer screens, your trembling fingers springing to life to pick out the assorted chef d'oeuvres that your have bespattered the story with. it is just that a story
oh and FYI i am 15 and this is an english lit assignment so to put eloquence to an end shut up
an 'screw,' might i add 'you'
Author, stop trying to defend your ridiculously stupid story. There was nothing about it that made sense and it was so improbable that it was laughable. Never heard the word sex? Doesn't know the difference between male and female sex organs? Give me a bloody break you wanker!
You guys are such morons. You're not at all constructive in your criticism, and you're being the most worthless critics I have ever heard. It's a fantasy, and it's someones else's hard work. Who gives you the authority to be dick wads about that? I want to see you right better, not just act as if you were.
To the Author, please keep writing. This was an enjoyable read, and I look forward to seeing what you come up with next.
This is a great story that could really use a little more detail and buildup. But, I loved it!