All Comments on 'Patti'

I know this is supposed to be erotic, but it comes across as irritating. He is a total asshole who can't stop staring at boobs and she is as stupid with her revenge slut act.For a fine writer this is disappointing story.

60 year old George

The last poster is cussing a man who had been dead for at least 5 years and more, so who is being silly here?

I doubt Ted gives a shit what you have to say.

Sally

It is fairly clear why this couple became an ex-couple! Not sure of the contribution of the prior outa-town exhibitionist component, but this in-town party behavior was NOT mutually agreeable and that was made clear BEFORE it became too late! The 'killer comment' was when Hubby indicated he was not going to allow Sweetie's example to influence him!