Dancing with You

amazing.....

Great story... amazing detail. Feels like you really were there. I wont tell you about the end... dont cheat... its worth it

I was you!

You painted such a realistic and tender lovemaking scene that as I listened I became you. Everything you did, I was doing, and everything the other woman did, she did to me - to my breasts, to my clit, to me. And I am a guy! I can only imagine how the women reading this reacted. Please write more like this one.

Follow-up wanted - PLEASE!

Can I please ask for a follow up? How about doing the same story, but from the other woman's perspective? "I had turned down several guys who asked me to dance, and was talking with my girlfriends, when I saw this woman headed for me..." Alternatively, she could return to her girlfriends, who ask what happened, why she was gone so long. She could reluctantly tell them, piece by piece, that she had kissed the other woman, and then ask whether they had ever done this. The 2 girlfriends say "no". She encourages them to try it, but they are afraid and she says "I bet you'll like it - so she kisses them both. They do like it and then kiss each other, etc.

Whoa... I need a cold shower now

You have an incredibly sexy voice, and your descriptions are pitch-perfect (the punctuating groans and sighs really draw in the listener as well). You also went where very few--if any--women go in these lesbian audio stories: the other woman's gorgeous ass. God, I nearly died when you described that scene! You have a gift, dear, and I hope you'll keep sharing it with us!!

Horny in London

My pussy got so wet listening to that. I love fantasising about girls. Hearing a horny girl's voice really tipped me over the edge. Thanks so much x

FUCK

hey im 19 and soaked here, fuck me that was SO HOT, its 2:00am and i'm going to bed to rub myself another round with your orgasm ending running through my head. To give you a mental image.. I live with my brother and parents =P and have long dark black hair, nice tight tanned skin, dark big doll like eyes, 36C cup chest, nice little ass, well basically i am a looker baby, and wish i could take you back to my bed with me right now.. really do. Reply to me sweetness and i'll show you what im talking about: a_lebadah@hotmail.com

Dance with me, please?

Oh. God. I love your voice and I love your story, and heaven help me, I love the way you cum. Very beautiful, sex and arousing, you've got me completely soaked. Thank you so much!

WOW

I have never been sexually attracted to women, but I have to admit that this audio made me very wet. I loved it! You have such a sensual, soft and sexy voice. It's so relaxing, but so exciting at the same time. I will definitely be listening to this one again and again!

What can I say that would even come close!!

I check every few days for your latest submission. You have not disappointed..

Un-freaking believeable!

Way beyond anything posted on Literotica. Head and shoulders above every other audio story in storyline and performance. A perfect 10! The 40 minutes flew by. I can't wait to see what you have in store next! It's almost impossible to express my praise. Well done.

I loved it!

Loved it..... all i will say is WOW!!!! It definately held my intereast! :-)

incredible

I am in awe. This was incredibly sensual and wonderful journey, so realistic and wonderfully told. And dear god, your voice... it was the most amazing thing I have ever heard.
Thank you for dancing with me.

Awsome the best ever

You told that with the greatest, most moving, delightful, explicit, loving, caring, detailed, sexy, dreamy, spectactular. Your style is so unique, so sexy, with just enough action to make one blow their load, I know any women would love to be yours. Awsome, keep them cumming.

Wow...

I just finished listening and all I can say is wow. That was definately hot. I loved it

Oh my god...

Never thought I'd stray to this part of literotica but my goodness am I glad I did. Your voice captured me and just..drove me over the edge. You're sexy as hell and I love your voice, your stories, keep em coming...I sure will.

bored

At first I didnt Know it was a woman you were talking about. It will help to make a good story first then work from there. You have a great voice, so you don't have to play it up much. A good story itself is erotic, which stimulates the right brain cells. Being a story teller is what kept many civilizations alive to this day. I hope you continue and develope your craft. Bye.

@bored

Thanks for the constructive criticism. I appreciate you taking the time to tell me where I can improve. This was the second story I recorded and I know there's always room to grow. Please check out a couple of my other stories submitted since Dancing and let me know if you notice the improvement in both my recording technique and my story telling abilities.

I totally agree with story telling being vital to civilizations. Again, thank you for commenting.

dancing with you

I must say that was they best storie I"ve ever herd it was erotic and sentual I could allmost smell the juices flowing

zachinky92@yahoo.com

beautiful

That was exquisite. Thank you for sharing this. You have an incredible gift. I'm looking forward to reading more.

So amazing

Thank you so much for sharing. I haven't been with a woman yet but I've always been so curious. Your story has been an incredible experience for me and you sound so amazing. Thank you so very much.

Splendid

I have enjoyed this many, many times, and recently shared it with a friend. She loved it as much as I do. You have a magnificent voice, and although this is by far my favorite, I enjoy all of your work tremendously. Thank you :)

I love this one too!

I really do love your voice. You have a very natural sense of pacing and you're very expressive.

Amazing.

You are so sexy! Your voice is magic...loved the climax x

wow

omfg....that was amazing and it really got me hot, bothered and cumming, i hope you post more of these female encounters xxx

WOW!

I want to say more than that but my brain is lost in the memoery of your beautiful seduction. A truly erotic story and my new favorite. Thanks for sharing your beautiful story and voice with us.

OMG

You made me cum so much, I would love for you to do that to me... over and over and over again

oh myyyyy

Thanks so much. That was delicious.
I can't wait to be licked like that ....

Came hard with you 3 times!

Oh nice.

Wow. This really was something to listen to. Thoroughly engaging on every possible level. Needless to say, I will be going through your catalogue summarily. :D

Oh yes

You know it's a great story when you listen and get that feeling inside, like you are really there. Can listen to your voice all night!

Amazing

That was absolutely wonderful! Thank you soo much!

Wow....what a wonderful seduction

Your story is one of my all time favorites. I love listening to you anyway but this is truly a masterpiece. I could see it and feel it. lol...to be a woman...that woman would indeed be a wonderful fantasy. I'll try to get about commenting on the rest of your wonderful work. Thanks for sticking around and please keep posting.

dave_l2lp [@ yahoo]

only for you raven

you may have a special place in your heart raven but you cant even imagine how deep and special place you hold in my heart
i love you
i love your voice
i love your creations
i love your imaginationsss.
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never ending love for you in my heart

New Fan

As the other comments suggested, you are amazing! I love your audio posts because they're so much more than just talking or getting off. They're a full audio story with musical accompaniment and are great quality. That being said I do have one piece of constructive criticism. The audio recordings I've listened to so far are recorded VERY quiet. Therefore they require significant amplification to listen to. However at that volume all the P's and pops nearly blow your speakers. I would recommend recording them at a higher volume so they would be more enjoyable to play back. Other than that keep up the amazing work! I look forward to listening to your other stories!

Definitely Hot...

I have never had a woman to woman experience. ..I would have to say I have never been more turned on and wet. ..I want to try it now

You made me cum so hard, I'm still soaking wet for you. Fuck, what I wouldn't give to have your mouth on my aching clit right now..

pronunciation

it's "MIS-che-vous" darling, not "mis-CHEE-vi-ous".

Other than that - LOOOOVVVEEDD the story, would love to try this at least once in life.
OOh!!!

Actually...

...according to Merriam-Webster, "mis-CHEE-vee-us" is also correct.
And frankly, you can say whatever the hell you want! Soooo sexy. Thank you!

so hot

Wow... that was so hot... I'd give anything to watch to cum like that.... I was stroking my cock and cummed so hard when you let our that moan as you cummed. I'm covered in cum now... thank you

First time I've listened to a female voice narrating a story. But there is just something sultry, attractive, and alluring about yours that kept me intrigued. I have not came that hard or much in an extremely long time, so thank you. Great story, highly realistic and sexy. So good. Kinda speechless and words aren't my strong point at the moment. Amazing story, 5 stars.

Your Voice

This is definetly the reason why I couldn't stoped hearing the audio. It's insane. You took me to a new place. Thank you.

Wow!

Imagined you were doing that to me and I came over and over! Thank you.