Thanks so much for putting in the section breaks. That helps a lot. I'm not sure about the 3d person sentences that start the sections, but it was much, much easier to follow the shifts in POV. Keep going!
so glad you added a new one! i always check! thanks!!!!!!
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Thanks!
Thanks so much for putting in the section breaks. That helps a lot. I'm not sure about the 3d person sentences that start the sections, but it was much, much easier to follow the shifts in POV. Keep going!
yay
so glad you added a new one! i always check! thanks!!!!!!
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