All Comments on 'Lightning Reveals All'

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spoiled_bratschespoiled_bratschealmost 15 years ago
simply wonderful

beautifully written and scorching hot. welcome aboard, will be watching for more from you.

clive_iluvnycclive_iluvnycabout 11 years ago
Hot.

Very nice work. I do not generally go for 1st person point of view, but this pulled me in. Would love your stories to be longer. Thanx for your contributions to this community.

TrisashusbandTrisashusbandover 7 years ago

Eloquent, sexy and well written. 5 Stars !!

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