All Comments on 'Surprised by Her Daughter'

The way you described those big milky tits and when she sprayed his chest...OMG that was a turn on! Love the milking subject and can't wait to read some more.

That was a super story that you wrote about the man and a friend's daughter. I love the way you described the erotic sequence between the two of them. It was nice to see the sex be clean and enjoyable for both of them.

I don't understand why you did not make a baby with her...is was obvious that she thought of you that way, with the two of your thoughts of past occurrences.

Crap that was insanely good! This story has everything!

You tell us the story of how you wrote the story lol - and vivid in its detail.

Too good for our own good heh

..."38D" and "gymnast with tiny body" just don't go together. The biggest tits I've ever seen on a gymnast were Ludmila Tourischeva's, and even they would have struggled to be more than 34s.

but hubby is CHEATING on his wife; this is not MATURE ROMANCE

Would like to se this expanded as had with wife's friend

but requires more chapters LOL. Ok so I am greedy.

This story was bloody fantastic, please write some more to this. It would seem this little hottie want much more.

I absolutely loved this story. I had some great elements to it that were extremely hot. I'll be reading more of you work for sure and look forward to it. Thanks for your contributions to the Lit community!

But with a slight twist on the last couple paragraphs there could have been a Chapter 2 here. Who wandered in and found the porn movie and laptop (and her clothes on the floor) while they were having fun out on the deck? His wife? Her mother? His daughter? One of his daughter's sexy friends? All kinds of interesting possibilities. And of course if he was too used up to take proper advantage right then, she and the newcomer might decide that it would be good to come back tomorrow evening for a little party, just the two of them together -- with him.

After this experience, is she still planning to marry the idiot who treats her like dirt?

A really good read easy to follow what to hear of daugghters friend