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Island Prey Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Tarheels_Fan06/12/09

Please continueAnother

Another good chapter Mr. Slick. I'm looking forward to the next (I hope)

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by marklion06/13/09

Great Chapter!!!!

SLICK that was a great after you wrote about the women trying to be captured by the men. The sex scenes were erotic and just plain hot at times during the chapter. I can hardly wait to see what it to with the next chapter and how the Bennett's play games with these people.

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by Anonymous06/13/09

A Woman's Vew

Very exciting story. I'm sure I would enjoy being "caught" by several men but I would definitely make them find me, which would add to the thrill of being caught and conquered.

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by mBrow06/13/09

Very nice

Fine story! Thank you Slick dude! I hope you continue because I quite enjoy your work. ** **
The cast is complicated! That makes it fun, though. To help, here is a cast listing: **
Bennett and Morgan, Bill Bennett **
Bennett’s two sons **
Jack Reynolds and Katie **
Craig Anderson and Cindy **
black guy Michael and his fiancée Eve **
Amy Gentry, 19 year-old girl in accounting, and brother Tommy Gentry **
lesbians Gayle, with short dark hair in travel department, partner cute blonde Hanna **
older woman Mary and Fred ** **

Some corrections: **
Chapter 1 **
The females will be the pray (sic) prey on the island and the men will hunt us down. **
Chapter 2 **
She headed down the fresh water stream to the beach and walked up onto the Bennett son's (sic) sons who had just came back from monitoring the others. **
He had lasted more than thirty minutes but only another minute more before he ejacuated (sic) ejaculated. **
The calvary (sic) cavalry has arrived. **

Please keep writing! We love it!

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by dirtyoldman2b06/23/09

Don't leave us hanging...

Keep going. I love your stories because the characters are real, while the situations are “out there”. There are many ways you can go with this one, I can’t wait to see which one you choose.

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