All Comments on 'Party On The Beach'

A lot of odd PoV shifts, so it is sometimes difficult to know who is doing what to whom, which quickly leads to not CARING, because all the females are just orifices, and the males (only 2 IDed, Hubby only one described) just protuberances! No one has ANY individuality, aside from different body shapes.

2.9 = 3*

Have been in Pandora's box?

I miss Lickideesplit's comments.

@Recent Anon.

Still trying to acknowledge good WordSmithing, mainly in LW. And to recognize the imagination of perverts who are imperfect in TaleCrafting but have interesting ideas. Those authors I try to offer alternative ways to convey those thoughts without stepping on their authorship toes. I do chide those authors who exceed the ‘one seriously implausible circumstance per short story. One dud can exceed 8 inches of manmeat (OK, unless identical twins) but all 16 gangbangers to be in the 1-in-a-10,000 group is stupid… plus which, a story like that belongs in the

99-in-a-100 Group Sex group anyway.

Authors who maintain their 5th grade besties playground info about male and female anatomies are too lazy to check their data with their after-work beer buddies (or golf crowd) about a well-hung dude fucking his delighted pick-up being long enough to squeeze through her cervix and into her womb/uterus. (Just kidding about proper authorities.) Kinda same feeling about depending on Voice-To-Print to know when ‘ compliment’ or ‘complement’ is right.

Two aspirant LIT authors have asked LKD to edit there (ha, cawch’ya) their pride and joy. One never posted, the other is now well-received with better stories but, I believe, did not post anything related to the only story where he/she requested my editing, so batting 0.

Addendum

By the bye, I did re-read POTB. I have no reason to change any of my comments, and see no point to comment on more trivial things I could say. BUT, I did change my rating to 2*

LDS