It was so sweet but far too lacking in detail . It all happened too fast , not enough build up . He could have caught glimpses of her at home partially naked or both of them snuggled together watching a scary movie at home .
A chapter that has their love deepening even more as her belly swells with their baby. Then they decide to get married for real, going to Mexico to a plush resort for couples,to have the ceremony. Thanks for the good story.....Rich
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Anonymous06/14/09
Needs a sequel.
It was fun while it lasted. It just didn't last long enough.
I've read a lot of your stories and this may be the best. I, too, would love to see you do that sequel. More is not necessarily better, but in this case I truly think it would be. Thanks for a good submission, as usual.
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Anonymous12/19/11
Great Story please give us more.
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Anonymous09/21/12
Very ..
Very nicely done and would like to see some more writings in the future from you.!*
"5" all the way.*
But it's not necessary; this is perfect as it is, and it's been one of my favourites for a long time now; every time I come back to it, it's like reading it for the first time; very, VERY few stories here have captured me like that, so kudo's to you!
I'm sorry to disappoint my fellow netizens, but it was waaaaay too rushed to be anything near perfect. Well, there was this one thing though - the perfectly WRONG mixture of classy vintage lit., a rosy, heavy romance with a decent dose of hurricane.
The anonymous reviewer who wrote the review "Anything But" needs to visit a psychiatrist. This story was absolutely perfect as to characters, setting, and tone.
That said, I did feel that the sex was over too soon. Perhaps there will be a second part to this story, where you can draw out the sex part a bit more. Given the twins' love for each other, their next sex should be slow, sensual, and definitely not rushed.
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Very sweet
It was so sweet but far too lacking in detail . It all happened too fast , not enough build up . He could have caught glimpses of her at home partially naked or both of them snuggled together watching a scary movie at home .
A follow up chapter please
A chapter that has their love deepening even more as her belly swells with their baby. Then they decide to get married for real, going to Mexico to a plush resort for couples,to have the ceremony. Thanks for the good story.....Rich
Needs a sequel.
It was fun while it lasted. It just didn't last long enough.
Good while it lasted!
I've read a lot of your stories and this may be the best. I, too, would love to see you do that sequel. More is not necessarily better, but in this case I truly think it would be. Thanks for a good submission, as usual.
Great Story please give us more.
Very ..
Very nicely done and would like to see some more writings in the future from you.!*
"5" all the way.*
well written
Nice build-up look forward to another chapter.
A second chapter would be nice...
But it's not necessary; this is perfect as it is, and it's been one of my favourites for a long time now; every time I come back to it, it's like reading it for the first time; very, VERY few stories here have captured me like that, so kudo's to you!
Wow
Blushing as I admit this, but it made me wish I was Casey!
Oh how I wish I was Casey. Beautiful and perfect love. Will there be more?
Awwww !
That was really special. That indeterminate thing that got to me.
Beautiful
Anything but!
I'm sorry to disappoint my fellow netizens, but it was waaaaay too rushed to be anything near perfect. Well, there was this one thing though - the perfectly WRONG mixture of classy vintage lit., a rosy, heavy romance with a decent dose of hurricane.
Over too soon.
The anonymous reviewer who wrote the review "Anything But" needs to visit a psychiatrist. This story was absolutely perfect as to characters, setting, and tone.
That said, I did feel that the sex was over too soon. Perhaps there will be a second part to this story, where you can draw out the sex part a bit more. Given the twins' love for each other, their next sex should be slow, sensual, and definitely not rushed.
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