All Comments on 'Straight Talk'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Idiot

A single guy writing about things you don't have a clue about. You think you want to swing go for it, but you have to either not really give a shit or be a little bent for it to work. A lot of both works the best, cause most msrriages don't survive. Stright talk my ass.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Here's straight talk.....

..."Babe, I hope you've gotten all your 'what ifs' cleared up and out cause I'm pretty sure by now(35?) that making sex the focal point of a marriage is a losing proposition."Pistolpackinpete

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Pointless excersise in time wasting.

I want my three minutes back.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Loving

To me this story showed how a loving couple could push the envelope of their marriage.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Why did the husband hide in the closet?

Only wimps and cucks do that. But as for swinging go ahead knock yourself out fuck anyone you want it doesn't matter doesit as long as you fuck some who cares the marriage is doomed anyway. And as someone said this is a single person writing about swinging? what the fuck?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
very poor

the guy in the story was really just looking for a plane Jane single mother, shy and naive to have his personal fucktoy. He has no confindence in himself to much either, so looks for someone who has even less. Why ? otherwise he would have loved the way it is and not led her on the swinger path. so calling this an erotic story tells a lot about the writer.

WoodButcher57WoodButcher57almost 15 years ago
I know this is

just a story, but, what I have found is that when folks write, they put alittle of theirselves and beliefs into same. You say that you are over 18 and single, I don't normally side up with anonymous comments, but in this case I totally agree with,

Idiot

06/13/09 by Anonymous

A single guy writing about things you don't have a clue about. You think you want to swing go for it, but you have to either not really give a shit or be a little bent for it to work. A lot of both works the best, cause most msrriages don't survive. Stright talk my ass.

Other wise you write well, keep it up, but I would suggest that you pick another genre for your writting. If in fact that you are cloer to being 18 years old, you should gain more of life experiances before you continue down this road.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
How can you harm your marriage?

You cant harm what doesnt exist.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Hello LITEROTICA, I love you

The problem being caused by the anti the fuck you talkin' 'bout Mancelt listen I looked like a 45 year old god tonight after 3 weeks in the sun and swimming 3 kms every day(or maybe not quite,anyway ya know wot i mean) then cut myself shaving and forgot take the tissue of my chin and looked a cunt picking the missus up(Y'all know Hedon in the Balaerics( club on an island just off southeast S.)she's the m"·&)ªr)so chill. Life mends itself you let it and you don't? Fucked. Anyway Mancelts .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
MANCELT?

Are taking something? If not then you should do.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
NEEDED

Needed a story--stop--crap--break your fingers

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
hi cucky

send that slut my way since you like to share

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Joan: "Aren't all swingers perverts?"

YES!

Rancher46Rancher46about 2 years ago

Well, if Joan lets her hubby take her down the swinger path and starts to like 7+ cocks, how long do you think it will take her to want to trade up for bigger and better. I can see disaster coming to a marriage real soon.

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