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by PennLady06/13/09

Sweet

This seems a very sweet story, although it also feels a little rushed. I think more background on the characters would help, or maybe a change of POVs so we know what Jacques is thinking.

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by Anonymous06/14/09

AWESOME!!!!

This is really really great, i cant wait to read more!!! soon please :)

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